| 07考研大作文真题解析及参考范文 |
| 作者：佚名 文章来源：不详 点击数： 更新时间：2007-2-26 12:45:19 |
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| The purpose of the drawing is to show us that in the face of seemingly insurmountable challenges or predicament, possessing self-confidence is of utmost significance. Regardless of how much success one has had in school or at work, there are bound to be times when he or she will encounter difficulties and problems. It is at these critical times that his self-confidence, towards difficulty and life in general, eventually plays a crucial role in determining whether he can turn failure into victory.
I can think of no better illustration than the following one. Helen Keller was born deaf, dumb and blind, certainly nothing to give her self-confidence. Nevertheless, she went on to conquer her multiple handicaps to finally become a writer and lecturer, to become an inspiration to all. This case effectively clarifies that no matter what tasks we are confronted with, we should never overestimate the difficulties or underestimate our abilities.
参考译文
这幅漫画生动描述了足球场上的一名前锋正准备将球射入守门员把守的球门。在守门员看来，自己比起实际的身材渺小很多，以至于守门变成一个不可能完成的任务。反之，在那名前锋眼里，这位巨人守门员似乎占据了整个球门。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在看似不可克服的挑战与困境面前，最重要的是拥有自信。无论一个人在学校或工作中曾经如何成功，终有一天他会遭遇困难和问题。关键时刻，正是他对困难和人生的自信最终决定他能否反败为胜。
没有什么例子比下面的例子更有说服力。海伦·凯勒天生聋哑失明，当然没什么让她自信。但她不断克服多种障碍，最终成为一名作家和教师，成为世人的楷模。这个例子清楚证明了无论面临何种任务，我们决不能高估困难或低估自己的能力。
范文详解
本文共三段十句，总分总结构。语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当，语言自然流畅，语法错误极少，词汇和语法结构丰富多变。有效使用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰；内容完整，论证充分。
首段图画描述共三句，总分结构。首句总体描述图画的三大要素：人物（前锋＋守门员）、动作（射门＋守门）、环境（足球场），使用了物称代词作形式主语、被动语态、主语从句、现在进行时和过去分词短语作后置定语。二三两句分别挖掘两幅小图的细节词、串连成句，并列结构。第二句描述守门员眼中任务艰巨、无法完成，出现了介词短语放在句首作状语、三次主系表结构、两个从句（比较状语从句、表语从句）。第三句描述在前锋眼中，对手强大、难以战胜。首段先后出现了 “it is symbolically illustrated that", "striker", "shoot at the goal", "defended by a goalkeeper", "mission impossible", "on the contrary", ’giant guard" 等精彩语言。
第二段意义阐释共三句，总分总结构。首句是主题句及全文的中心思想，点出图画的深层象征寓意：面对挑战应该充满自信，使用了两次主系表结构、不定式短语作表语、介词短语放在句首作状语、动名词短语作定语。二三两句进行正反论证，第二句进行让步，使用了介词短语放在句首作状语、宾语从句、现在完成时、主谓倒装、定语从句。第三句进行正面论证和小结，使用了强调句、介词短语作定语和宾语从句。第二段依次运用了 "the purpose of the drawing is to show us that", "in the face of", "challenges and predicament", "self-confidence", "is of utmost significance", "regardless of", "no matter how", "there are bound to be times when", "encounter difficulties and problems", "it is ...that", "critical", "eventually play a crucial role", "turn failure into victory"等精彩表达。
第三段举例论证共四句，总分总结构。首句承上启下进行过渡。二三两句举出海伦·凯勒的例子进行论证，具体生动，使用了过去时和平行排比结构。尾句进行小结，前后呼应，运用了让步状语从句。尾段先后出现了 "illustration", "deaf, dumb and blind", "conquer multiple handicaps", "inspiratio上一页 [1] [2] [3] 下一页
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